Friday 29 October 2021

story


 HI bloggers 

this is my story about the funhouse 

Blog ya letter 

3 comments:

  1. Kia ora Aaron. Thanks for sharing your Doorway 3 writing about the Funhouse Door. You did a great job at describing what you saw which helped me as a reader to picture it in my head. Phew thankfully it was a puppy!

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  2. Hello Aaron!
    This is Mikayla from Rm7.
    I really like your blog about your writing:) Also next time you could do a better title for your blog post. Other then that its pretty good!! Blog you later!!! Mikayla:D

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  3. Kia ora Aaron Jarvis here, I love the story you made. Did this actually happen or did you make it up? Can't wait to see your new work, Keep up the great work.
    Blog ya later
    Jarvis

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